I enjoyed your story a lot. I liked your original characters and their relationship. Your Bodie and Doyle were great. I liked their relationship a lot as well. I think you did a good job with your story line and how you showed me that Bodie and Johnny were once friends.
Your descriptions of events and surroundings was quite vivid. I could picture the scenes as they unfolded. Thanks so much for presenting me with a wonderful case story with our lads doing what they do best.
I think the political aspects of the story were well done. It was interesting to read about how much the decisions of a government can affect people's lives. Your writing is very tight and your presentation moves the plot along so that I couldn't wait to see what would happen next.
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Date: 2010-09-08 08:51 pm (UTC)Your descriptions of events and surroundings was quite vivid. I could picture the scenes as they unfolded. Thanks so much for presenting me with a wonderful case story with our lads doing what they do best.
I think the political aspects of the story were well done. It was interesting to read about how much the decisions of a government can affect people's lives. Your writing is very tight and your presentation moves the plot along so that I couldn't wait to see what would happen next.
I think you did an excellent job.